I agree with all the above.

Also:
    1) widen the pic, move fortress to one side and add an imposing mountain
and precipice.

    2) Darken and add a dramatic sky

    3) Add some props - skulls or bodies on posts, gaurds, statues, perhaps
some ravens....

Mick

BTW - I may be able to help with a raven model.

"Zeger Knaepen" <zeg### [at] yahoocom> wrote in message
news:39cf6d12@news.povray.org...
> I like it, actually.
> But... (Always a 'but')
> Try lowering the camera-viewpoint (pointing a little bit upwards).
> And turn the camera slightly to the side.  It will make things look
bigger.
> And I think it would be more imposing if you rendered a night-view.  Maybe
> with some nice light effects with torches and the moonlight,...
>
> ZK
> http://www.povplace.be.tf
>
> "Marc-Hendrik Bremer" <Mar### [at] t-onlinede> schreef in bericht
> news:39cf4500@news.povray.org...
> > Hi!
> >
> > Here is the scene Pic I work on. As always I'm not totally satisfied
with
> > the results. It refuses to look imposing or something like that. Might
> have
> > to do with the lighting, the camera position and angle. But since I'm
> > dreaming of building the whole city of  Torganswall (the capital of my
> reign
> > on the world Asgard) or at least more parts of it, I want to look it
good
> as
> > independent of these things as possible.
> >
> > Most of the parts are isosurfaces and HFs. It took approx. 6 hours to
> render
> > with radiosity and AA 0.3.
> > The sky definitely needs more work.
> >
> > Anyway ... please let me know, what you think about it.
> >
> > Marc-Hendrik
> >
> >
> >
>
>

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